SteemitPoetryContest #(11) New pages ♥
New pages ♥
2017 gave me 365 days
Lots of memories I cannot erase
It was both a fast yet slow pace
All I know is I must take next mazeI was always been in total grace
But my last year just do not want to be embraced
I have started and ended my 2016 right
Why does my 2017 start nowhere brightI do not want to just have a straight face
I know I should do something to ace
I also do not mind being out of place
I just cannot live in the far outer space
fmo1
2018, Philippines
Thank you for reading! ♥
UPVOTE is to Appreciate
RESTEEM is to Support
COMMENT is to Encourage
Keep on writing. Focus your passion here in steem :)
Thanks for the morale you've sent. ♥
Nice poem, keep writing. Strive, work hard and you will thrive.
Thank you, I'm trying to do my best. :)
You have the poetic heart that's why your poem has its feeling.
Means a lot to me. I don't know where I'm good at until I found Steemit.
Here.. I am not shy to express. Hence, I am just as surprised that I now can come up with 2 related lines.
I'm still practicing, I hope for myself to get better. :)
Thank you for participating and sharing such a great writing :)
@margaretwise
Your kind words and encouragement are enough to keep me confident that I can get by and save myself from the current darkness I am dealing with. Writing calm and saves my sanity. :)
Thanks to you and happy to be in Steemit.♥
Thank you for such a kind words I am honored my dear. Have a full of inspiration day
Awesome poem @feye ! keep up the gread work , and good luck !🚀👍✌💕✌😍
Thank you for encouraging 👐 High five Sistah! ❤
Your welcome !! good night !😴😴😴✋✋✋
I added some lines for it, dear. ^^
What do you think of these, @karenmckersie?
Call me full of ego and crazy
Noise that I do not have to carry
As long as I do good
Never mind that you understood
Few catastrophic situation appear
Everything to me was then unclear
Dreams must be chased
Not a praise as base but a heart to finish the race
Slowly but surely in my own ways
2018 I promise that you will not be a waste
Through the peers that are all in cheer
I will take my leap and succeed in this sphere
^^
Very nice ! Your an awesome poet with great rhymes ! im not a poet at all , I just entered a fun little poem about steemit for the fun of it ! but i love your addition !😃
Ow.. pls. don't say that..I'm no good at anything that you're good at.. :)
But because of you, I had the guts needed to start writing. How awesome can you be bcoz of that?! :D
thanks to your positivity, my friend. You're one of the Fairy God Mother of my poems. ♥ ^_^