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RE: The Prime Minister's Car Auction
This is astonishing. It redefines the word "corruption."
Winston Churchill once said, "People get the government they deserve." Where was the Pakistani Press ... the Opposition parties ... the electorate? This ought to be a humiliation for the entire country.
Because this was such a good article and there are 3 days left until post payout, I would suggest making a couple of slight modifications:
- There are a couple of typos (misspelled words).
- Inform the reader earlier that your country is Pakistan.
- Change the title to: Corruption: The Prime Minister of Pakistan's Obscene Car Auction.
Other than that, very well written. Nicely done.
I found this article via @pifc's "Pimp It" project.
Quill
Thank you and will do, appreciate the honest review.