Why End? Poem

in #poety8 years ago (edited)

Everyone’s right to die,
Suicide but why?

Depressive will lost, amplified
Internally unsatisfied, hands tied
Must confide this low tide.

As When it’s done, suffering just begun
For all who remain, grieving pain
Acid rain, jugular vein
Widow weeping
Sorrow tears seeping.

But selfish is it not?
Especially if you leave a tot,
Behind in the review,
Nobody to look up to.

Closed curtain,
Non-existent burden
If you felt their pain,
Would you feel the same?
One will never know I guess
Miss you,
Godbless.

Picture drawn by me @chickenburger

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Thanks, for reading and the vote.
Appreciate it.

Man, you need to stop making these "suicide notes", they freak me out... Good thing you continued blogging after this one...

lol yes I'm still here.

Power stuff. Thanks for sharing. The graphic really drove it home as well.

Thanks for your interest. @freeinthought great name by the way.

Woah... a lot of truth in it and drawing is the depiction of what is in thoughts while composing this. Awesome! Thanks for sharing

Thanks for reading, Glad you liked my post. Sometimes pictures are nice to go with the story other times is nice for the reader to use their imagination.

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