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RE: SPU Poetry Contest #1: The process of writing a love letter
My throat, a dam
Passing droplets while gushing waters attempt to overflow
My tongue, a straightjacket
Twisting arms and disorienting limbs
Struggling
Strangling
Suppressing
I liked this part!
You suppressed your inner nerd a lot in this poem, but i could see it sometimes struggling to get out xD
First time i actually read a poem in English, and on steemit xD poetry is not really my thing, but i liked yours :D
thanks so much @teutonium ! and can i say im very honored to pop your english poem cherry? ;p maybe thats the struggling part - the inner nerd trying to bust out with some crazy erudite vocabulary that will unfortunately not have the equal appeal of poetic fervor. alas, the struggle is real. and such is the nerd-artist fate ;p
nerdartist- you got yourself a new name if you ever think about changing yours xD
hehehe i could cover the walls with all the other account name options - dont even get me started teuto! (your new nickname i just bestowed upon you;p)
ahahha, most ppl in the online community call me teuto, it's easier than teutonium! ill call you Breana!