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RE: SPU Poetry Contest #1: My Little Mundane Life
Life tumbles on like waves of a mighty river
Amid its entire roar, a silent wish echoes
This was great, contrasting imagery. Life can feel so 'noisy', and we seek stillness, quite. There is a lot of depth to this - I like it!
there is really so much to life than we can comprehend. Thank you