You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: SPU Poetry Contest #1: A Preoccupied Death
I enjoyed how you said that "it can only be tamed". It's unstoppable and it cannot be covered - we should not be trying to hide it or run away.
Time forces its hands upon me,
Squeezing the life from my bones,
Piercing me with the pain of age,
These lines were intense; I could picture the imagery.
Thanks Jeremy.