This is a well-written poem, @cheryldavis! In my opinion, using the emojis detracts from it, and makes it look childish, which it is not. They definitely don't do anything to enhance or add to the poem. I suggest that you remove them, and bring this poem into the world of serious writing where it deserves to be.

Also, you use the word torns twice. Did you mean to say thorns? I wasn't sure if you were using creative artistic license here, or it was a spelling error. Either one works, in this case, but torns is not an actual word in English.

Cheers!