SPU Poetry Contest #1: JOY ACTIVIST
Handling happiness with such levity
Seems you and deception are in a tie
All hail thee!!! KING OF DEPRAVITY
Your throne soon will be gone
Life has the sweetest karma
Guess you will be its braun
Taking my message as all, pro-forma
Hear me now and please refrain
From this uncommon blasphemy
Or have me to be your bane
Telling our story of pure alchemy
Today you have the sweetest chance
To live again and truly live
Withdraw from your default prance
Choose to love and freely give
by yours truly @klynic
This poem was inspired by a post by @warpedpoetic for the STEEMIT POETS UNITED contest
THESE WERE THE LINE THAT INSPIRED THE POST ABOVE :
Laughter; a deception, a lie
Hiding truth in white teeth,
Smiling at you as if the world
Was a playground and butterflies
Were never cocoons eaten by bats.
The original peom by @warpedpoetic can be found here
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nice mask
haha, thank you
Deception comes in all forms and sizes and at times you can not even detect it. :) Great job! ^^
very true...
Guess we need the deception police to help....lol
Haahha nice. We should report it right now. ^^
Great poem. Thanks for your hard work :D Keep it up. Upvoted.
thank you so very much
I love how the poem ended - "Choose to love and freely give". I see a lot of potential in your writing, although, I do feel like some lines were led by rhyme and lost their meaning along the way.
really?
gimme the lines, so I'll help clarify you ....
Thanks for reading sire
sure.
Both of these instances. The last line throws me off from what is being said. I am open to hearing your explanation/clarification. Thank you :)