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RE: Poetry Slam Challenge #2: (Freedom's Spark)
Hehe, I like your rhyme! But I think the last fee/free is kinda a stretch, esp when it's the end. But keep up the good work :-) (And the drawing is super cool!)
Too much cheese? Yeah I tend to agree with you on that one. I don't take myself too seriously. I appreciate the feedback.
Thanks for reading.