Poetry Slam Challenge #2: (Yes To Freedom!)

in #poetryslamtwo8 years ago

(Photographed while hiking with friends on La Roqueta Island)

Woods. Word. Yes.

Herban art, meet urban art.

Juxtaposition
I'm always fishin'
for a lil' more freedom.
He-dom. She-dom. We-dom.
All getting along,
being our favorite song,
not making each other wrong...

Further down the trail are forked choices
with lots of distracting, untruthful voices
saying "Come this way!" "Buy this crap!"
But deep inside, we know it's a trap.

Freedom is, first, an inside job
I must first master the inner mob
before I can see the outer gangs
of government, police and taxation fangs.

Also on the path is serenity.
Always available. Always free.
But to choose it, means I renounce something less.
I can live with that, for the sweet caress

of moments, and meals, and motley mashups
with folks who are real, and lives that don't smashup
the rights of others, my sisters and brothers
to me, being free, is for brave motherf*ckers.

'Cause scars will come. And losses, too.
You didn't think freedom was ALL good times, did you?
Some choices are so hard, many choose enslavement
rather than face life without a good insurance rate.

This thing costs, and it's worth it, from what I can tell.
That other paved road led to an unoriginal hell
filled with plastics and rumors and emptiness
but this wild path I chose, I gave it my "YES!"


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I'm more than feeling this! Being free is for brave muthas indeed. Freedom is a big, scary yes!

The wild path is always more fun... at least for a time.

"at least for a time." <--- that's wise, @beginningtoend.

@girlbeforemirror... It's just sumthin' 'bout that word, huh? Thank you :-)

That photo pops Erika!!

:-) Thanks, @hilarski! It sure stood out compared to everything else I saw on that hike.

Just want you to know my opinion; I kind of hated it, but that dosent mean its not good!

What a clear and helpful comment, @coloured-content.

Nice submission @erikaharris, you get my vote!

That makes me smile :-) Thanks, @yogi.artist!

First most powerful word... "No!". Second most powerful word... "Yes!". Good stuff!

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