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RE: 🎭Poetry Slam Challenge 7 💸: Song of Swordsman - 剑客之歌 （by @ace108)
I am completely digging the Acrostics and the sword. Great work on the dual language!
I am completely digging the Acrostics and the sword. Great work on the dual language!
Yay. Thanks for your comments.
Any thoughts on which of the 3 options will be a better presentation?
I thought they were all part of the same entry, just styled differently and mixed with/without languages. I would suggest they all stay! I really enjoy this exactly as it is, with the multiple images :)
Yes, it's styled different as you said and same poetry but I could decide and hope to get feedback and see what people to keep in mind for future works.:-)
Oh okay! As for feedback for the future, I'd vote for #1. I like the coloring on the text on the left side, and it looks like a tattoo on the wrist. I'd only further suggest you take the picture against a different background. Perhaps the sky, or skyline, or forest or something :) I hope that helps
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