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RE: Poetry Slam Challenge 8: Sun Rise
Small suggestion though I have not joined this one: I saw some entries with space before the "If I ruled the world". I think it looks a little better that way.:-)
Small suggestion though I have not joined this one: I saw some entries with space before the "If I ruled the world". I think it looks a little better that way.:-)
Nice suggestion thanks! I think it does look better that way too, however, the contest template clearly stipulates exactly what the lines should be and the example has no space before the "If I ruled the world". Having been indoctrinated with a very literal, logical, and mathematically structured education and many years of computer programming it never occurred to me to deviate from the predefined structure in such a way... lol.
You got a point too. We are interpreting differently. I think there's one/two entries with spaces. Although I'm not in this run, I'll check the result and see if the space line has any impact maybe.