Poetry Dice Entry: Optimistic Transformation

in #poetrydice7 years ago

This is my entry for @robyneggs Poetry Dice Challenge 3000 (Week 25)
This weekly challenge is to create a poem using all 9 images on the dice must be referenced at least once, each, in the poem.
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Late at night I was about to sleep,
When a thought of happiness and sadness didn't skip.
Many questions inside me and I breath in deep,
I can't sleep even if I'm counting sheep.
My mind blown like a rolling dice,
I wish my life is like a rainbow with a golden price.
My life was full of emptiness and pain,
But I stand strong with a walking cane.
Now I count my blessings like the beads in abacus,
And transform my life with a positive focus.
I realized to stay firm and forget about bitterness,
And live my life like an apple full of sweetness.

This poem is about my late night thoughts of being optimistic in life despite of the problems that makes life miserable.

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Such a good close to the poem -

"I realized to stay firm and forget about bitterness,
And live my life like an apple full of sweetness."

If only we could all embody this! I think we are getting there though... piece by piece.

Really enjoyed reading this and great entry. If you fancy checking mine out, the link is below :)

--> Everything Transforms

With love
Hart Floe
<3

Very interesting and personal story to share with us about your own transformation. Cheers! Thanks so much for participating this week @ydal!

Thank you also for giving us the opportunity to express our feelings through poetry. :)

thank you janeeey hahahaha. simple rana oi kay way idea mosulod sa utok hahaha.

Nice! Its not easy to reference those nine images. Good job!

Thank you. It's not really easy to put it all together in one piece. Ehehehehe

Woah! This is a very nice piece! looking forward on reading a lot more poetry from you. Steem on!

I'm glad you like it. Thank you so much for the appreciation. :)-

Nicely done!

You captured all the elements well!

This is an uplifting comment. Thank you so much. :)

Thank you :)

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