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RE: Poetry Dice Entry: Challenge 3000 (Week 27) "Let's walk together"
Very nice :) For some reason I was under the impression out poems have to rhyme. Come to find out I am like the only person with a rhyming poem even though I very seldomly write in rhyme how funny is that ;) These are my favorite lines of your piece they hold power :
to love all my brothers.
I have grown strong like the tree
and my arms look like big branches
that shelter, refresh and bear fruit
Hi, friend @tygertyger.
I am very happy that the poem is to your liking.
I like classic Spanish poetry and I think I have a good command of poetic science and its laws.
But there is also free poetry, a Spanish-American current that emerged as a rebellion against the rules that try to put a straitjacket on the beauty of poetic feeling.
This is the case of my poem.
If my verses give emotion to someone, I already receive the best reward.
Thank you very much for reading.
Enjoy a beautiful weekend.
you too :)