Death Note (a poem for PDC3K Week 7 by @robyneggs)

in #poetrydice7 years ago (edited)

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Death Note



Time is no longer still
Criminals killing at their will
Death gods are continuously welcomin'
The people whose names there written

Then came a death god who's bored
Threw his notebook; everyone's floored
From the moon, he flew down the earth
Eyed the guy who got it; "Justice" was given birth

Criminals names and face that's known
Individually written... we hear death moan
Then came a genius that's called "L"
He's like a lovely flower from hell

"Justice guy's" world reduced to a tent
Frustrations from this genius; he couldn't vent
Every roll of the dice; "L" has predicted
Even death god's love for apples been hinted

@tegoshei




OMG! I have never been excited to write something for PDC3K..
Of course, every week is exciting, but when I saw the dice for this week, a certain animation sprang to mind.
It's even one of my favorites!

This week's roll and the anime"Death Note" inspired me to create this poem.
I bet everyone who has seen the anime or movie or read the manga would definitely relate.

The drawing above was something I drew around 4 years ago... ^^ I just thought of using it for this post, too. :)


If you're interested to join, here's the contest page by @robyneggs --> https://steemit.com/poetrydice/@robyneggs/poetry-dice-challenge-3000-week-7-new-roll

And here's the roll this week:


Thanks a lot for dropping by!
Love lots, @tegoshei

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Wooooo I love it!!! Both poem and drawing! Awesome work sis!!!

Thank you so much, sis! I'm so glad you like them! (^_^)/

You are very welcome :)💕💕💕

The beginning of the end

Followed you because of deathnote and one piece.

We're fellow anime lovers.

You're just more talented than me lol.

This anime changed my point of view in life.

I prefer the story of the movie though and I hope the US series is good enough but I don't think it will scratch the surface of how great the anime/manga is.

Cheers!

OMG! So happy to know a fellow anime lover here... Followed you back...
Couldn't agree more... I'm in love with the movie... all three of them! Haven't seen the US version though...

and ohh... no such thing as talented... we can always practice to improve, and that's what i did.. drawing is still my frustration.. hahaha

Well, the US version is coming to netflix, I think it's a movie instead of a series, trailer sucks lol

Looking forward to your future posts

Cheers mate :-)

ohh... xD
thanks a lot!
Cheers! ^^

You're welcome :-)

Whoot whoot! I love Death Note! It's one of my favorites! :-O So of course I can relate to your epic post @tegoshei!!!! "L" is kicking butt and taking names! :-)

Waah.. I'm happy that you can relate to it! :) And yes... "L" is the man!!!! ^_^

easily a fav anime character for me

Cool! He's one of my fave characters, too... :D

I always find it hard to draw L, nevertheless good job @tegoshei.

Likewise... I'll try to redraw him one of these days.. I wonder if I've improved a bit on it.. haha
Thanks a bunch @raizel! ^^

Daghana na nimog mga artworks oyy. suya ko. Wala koy talent ana haha

Hahaha.. thanks... I keep my old artworks mngud... :) They're like treasures for me.. ^^ Geh lang... let's draw something when we meet.. haha :D

Ohmygee . sige2 haha

Loved it! I like the drawing too.

Thank you so much! ^^

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