Poetry Dice (PDC3K wk19) Entry: Dreaming out loud

in #poetrydice7 years ago

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"You have to dream before your dreams can come true." - A. P. J. Abdul Kalam.

I collect quotes like a collection of skeleton keys
Which doors will they open while I sit here, at ease

Some wait until nightfall to create motion pictures with their minds
while I just focus inwards and open up my third eye

Where Time moves at a tortoise's pace
a nice reminder that slow and steady wins the race

I pass arrows pointing my opposite direction
I look away into another dimention

sleeping sheep spotted under the cresent moon
while the good wolf lurks to devour them soon

Sleeping fish follow the streem as empty vessels
digested by the living as their bones reach rock bottom and settles

Silence isn't the equivelent of peace.
The world rotates to its own harmonies

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This is really great! I love the alter reality you have created with the imagery. It sweeps me away and reminds me the cosmos is not so unattainable after all. :-) Cheers! This is an amazing piece!

Thanks so much!! Great contest and opportunity to paint these pictures with my words =)

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I think we both share the love for quotes, and we all have some of them sleeping in our mind which awake only when we finally understand then. When your perception of reality fits the quotes, and then you can take the knowledge out of it and live by it! When that happens there is an amazing feeling of "understanding" which is really underestimated in its positivity.

I don't know if this is what you meant in the beginning of the poem, but this is what I got from it, this is what resonates with me!

Ohh and don't underestimate yourself, you are one of the people I most appreciate here on steemit, you have huge emotional intelligence! ♥

I absolutely LOVE Tony Robbins ! And yes that's exactly what I was portraying in the first section of this piece and how it relates to our dreamstate. This is why I keep a mantra in mind for the day

Funny you say that! I just started to write all my dreams (when I can remember them haha), I want to see how they relate to my waking life but it also simply fascinates me ever since I read some Carl Jung. You should do that too :P

And Thank you for always encouraging me whether you message me directly or just through your content. There's like a team of light workers and I definitely consider you one of them 🙏🎀

Anytime!!!
That's my mission in here 😁

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Snap, Snap!! And that's a wrap or should I say RAP. You just raised the bar. @staceyjean. I loved it. Thank you for your entry.

Big big hugs! @rensoul I love this comment so much! Thank you for the highest of compliments, pun intended 😃 It's always good to raise the bar 🙌 @clayboyn thanks for showing me this contest!! 🙏♥♥♥

This was excellent! Silence isn’t the equivalent of peace

Well said! Love that line 💕

Ooooo Stace this poem gave me chills...!

Some crazy good shit right here

Where Time moves at a tortoise's pace
a nice reminder that slow and steady wins the race

<3

Thanks Love! 🤗

And the fact that it gave you chills! That's what's up. 🙌♥♥♥

This is excellent Stace!

Thank you Sun 🌞♥

Wow. I really like this poem. Well done!

Thank you 🙏

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