POETRY DICE ENTRY (THE SHEPHERD'S THOUGHT)
At the time of sleep at night
Came the bleating of the sheep's
Tried to keep them at peace
Even the staff won't do
This was the question I had in mind
At which I can't help but just say
All I hoped for was a day
Just to keep the noise away
Even the rolling dice can't help
To speed the night away
Hasten up I said to the dark
Hoping it hears my voice
I can't help but question the night
All I wanted was a day
But whence transformation take place?
Now It's time to use the mask
To hide myself away
The rays are too bright
Penetrating the eye
There stood a apple tree
Hope it would bring a good shade
The days of abacus are gone
To keep the sheep intact
Up above in the sky
Is the rainbow of hope
Shinning bright in the sky
Tried to take a peep
Tried to take a stare
Truly, the transformation is now.
Great peom, keep it up
Thanks
What anticipation indeed! I loved the way you took the reader through each stage of transforming, like rungs on a ladder.
Thank you very much. I hope to write more of this and better . In fact this is my very first time of composing a poem ever. Thanks for the encouragement
wow first time composing a poem?! You smashed it! You have a natural skill hehe... please do keep writing! I think you have a lot of potential as a writer after reading this :)
Great entry and if you fancy checking mine then please do... the link is below!
--> Everything Transforms
With love
Hart Floe
<3
totally smashed it! truly memorable!
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