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RE: Poetry dice Challenge 33 entry.
Wow my goodness I think you've evolved really, wow, your imagery level has become 200% top notch, really I love this verse
The day passes, I listen for
Footsteps approaching near,
Returned to me at each day's end
The one's I hold most dear.
It's emotional, it's like a state of patience waiting for closure from the ones, one truly loves, the verses are witty and sharp and it's amazing as well. It's been a long time my friend
Thank you @josediccus for putting into words what I at the moment ...too blown away to say. I underscore all that you have said it is a fitting testament to the evolution of @girlbeforemirror.