Poetry dice Challenge 33 entry.

Each morn I bid thee, Love you, bye
Atop of the stairwell,
Minds construct illusioned chateau
Wholly within I dwell.

Piscean gem of azure shine
Our binary stars twirl,
I close the door, you step onto
A bridge outside my world.

This is happiness to me now
It took some time to see,
There is nothing beyond these walls
That's waiting there for me.

The months now years spent searching for
A better way to be,
I measure life quite different now,
It dwells within you three.

The day passes, I listen for
Footsteps approaching near,
Returned to me at each day's end
The one's I hold most dear.


This is my entry for the 33rd Poetry Dice Challenge hosted by the lovely @rensoul17.

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You can check out the contest here.

There are a few options to choose from for participation.

The dice picture roll for the week.

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... and also some further prompts if you choose to use them. These are sentence and word prompts.

I used 2 of the sentence prompts.

“This is happiness to me”

And

“As I listened to the approaching footsteps."

The second prompt I applied a bit more loosely.

I know @rensoul17 and the dice founder @robyneggs would approve on any interpretation as long as it is in the pursuit of creative expression.

Or as ren encourages -

A divine a miraculous poem of might.
... I might need a little more practice to achieve this status, but it is something to strive for.

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Wow my goodness I think you've evolved really, wow, your imagery level has become 200% top notch, really I love this verse

The day passes, I listen for
Footsteps approaching near,
Returned to me at each day's end
The one's I hold most dear.

It's emotional, it's like a state of patience waiting for closure from the ones, one truly loves, the verses are witty and sharp and it's amazing as well. It's been a long time my friend

Thank you @josediccus for putting into words what I at the moment ...too blown away to say. I underscore all that you have said it is a fitting testament to the evolution of @girlbeforemirror.

I love both poem and the dice game :-)
Too bad I can't play it too :-(

Why can't you play it too?

I'm not good enough for it.
Plus English is not my native, that makes things harder

You write very well.
You couldn't get a kinder judge in @rensoul17 she values everyone.
Many people still doing the 100 days of poetry (which is finishing this week) are not English first language speaker, they have been embraced.

Perhaps include in your post that you are not confidant but are having a try.
Many poets post in both languages, be the one to start posting in your language and do an English version as best you can.
It's a great way to improve. If you don't want to that is OK, but it is not a matter of can't.

my goodness.. nice poetry good lines. keep it up

Very cool! I like the handwriting. :-)

Wow !!
Nice poem... Great entry... In every line give a meaning @girlbeforemirror

i love the handwritten draft best :D

Wow!!!! How authentic - the poem and the cute little drawings, I love this childlike innocence and lightness of it inspite of suffering you're going through! It feels sad, but not heavy sad. You're beautiful!

Wao! Such a beauty, i've been looking at your poetic prowess from afar and has never been this close. Hmmn! I plan on joining the challenge, just not sure if i'm ready for this. I guess nothing seems sure anymore...lol

Well i'm getting inspiration now, so watch out for my mind blowing entry...lol
Nevermind, i'm just kidding! Anyways this is a really beautiful piece and i'm honored competing with a talent such as yours in this @rensoul contest. Have a blast!!!

I love you so much, and I love how you are able to reach within me and find my hidden soul and intertwine your energetic frequency with mine and all of your giving and doing since we met has made me better, has helped me tremendously to keep going. To show me the deeper meaning in life which helps me not to get caught up in the many unnecessary distractions that are all illusions and have no worth. But your worth to me @girlbeforemirror is more precious than silver and gold. Thank you for your entry.

In this poetry you mentioned overall thoughts about your thoughts and reality and sometimes we tend to illusion about the things and sometimes we see reality as illusion, sometimes it's reflects as walls are about to say something to us, those things which we are hiding inside us. We human beings are explorative and in every moment we tend to find new vision for life to change our life. And when we love something we wait for those phases in life and we wait for them no matter how late it comes.

Thanks for sharing this poetry with us and wishing you an great day. Stay blessed. 🙂

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