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RE: Poetry Dice Entry - Shards Of Madness / An Original Poem
i'm a huge advocate of your unique brand of horror storytelling with your prosetry (poetry + prose!) you do a great job of revealing the turn and conflict to the reader right as the narrator is experiencing it, rather than revealing the hand too soon.
this piece in particular has a nice way of almost luring the reader into a sense of peace and complacency with your opening, making the turn hit that much harder later.
Love it, mate, keep it up!
I'm glad you like the style! It's something that I started playing with and it turned out great!
I was hoping people would feel themselves being lured on-wards into the story, glad to see it worked!
Thank you for the support!