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RE: Poetry Dice 23 Entry: Remembering the Future

in #poetrydice7 years ago

aesthetically, your poem is definitely inviting - creating a coherent shape that defines the start and end is always cool to see, and difficult to execute, good to see it here, @moeknows.

this is an interesting concept, creating within the confines of the imagery you've shown above, and you executed well; spinning a nostalgic, coming of age narrative. warming and pleasant.

well writ, Moe; can't believe you were going to further limit yourself with Fibonacci sequencing, especially with all the limitations already in place. Honestly, impressive as is.

Thank you for sharing.

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Thank you! I'm sorry for not replying when you made the comment. Yeah, the fibonacci was a bit too ambitious, but I may try it a a later time with syllables. I still couldn't see it going more than 7 lines though. Thank you for commenting, I do appreciate it.

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