I love that this is a poem. The structure, the actual formatting, lends itself so well to the weigh of the words. The free form nature makes the rhymes really pack a punch, the emphasis falling on just the right sentiments.

The mars gardens! Such beautiful imagery, I could just read this again and again <3 (and you know I will, cos this totally ties in!)

i want this, one ticket please, I will come! I just hope i'm worthy of passing through this wonderful portal