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RE: Poetry Dice Entry: Fountain Of Youth
Having read both a couple times, I'd say this is the stronger of the two, 'holding a scale, I'm telling the truth' is my favorite line. It sings to me about justice, and also people who only speak truth when they know they are holding the evidence to back it up. Nice stuff, best of luck in the competition.
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