Poetry Dice Challenge Week 29. Poem: When the time for balance is ripesteemCreated with Sketch.

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This is my entry for the Poetry Dice Challenge Week 29 contest organized by rensoul17.


There were four themes to choose from and I chose cryptocurrency.




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when the time for balance is ripe,

when chains delink and mutate to build bridges,

when feet freely tread these bridges and create tracks

and these tracks lead to an abundance of unfettered dreams,

when these dreams shoot myriads of stars that

topple skyscrapers catering for the Ones,

when the falling castles smash the conventional glass and

minds open themselves to believe

that the oceans can eventually run out of fish,

when the time for justice is ripe.




Photo by Manuel Sardo on Unsplash

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The imagery in this one was vivid and very good I felt the tempo building and then it just suddenly stopped. I wanted more.

Thank you for the feedback, @rensoul17. I hope to improve with practice.

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