"SteemitPoetryContest#4-EMPTINESS" DEPRESSION KILL-KILL DEPRESSION

in #poetrycontest7 years ago (edited)

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DEPRESSION KILL-KILL DEPRESSION by Dranren Carbonell

Behind your smile, I can see your tears
Deep in my heart, I can feel your fears
When I look in your eyes, I can see your broken dreams
I know how desperate it all seems

I need you to know that you are important to me
When I look at you, I believe in what I see
I need you to feel our love for you
And giving up on you, is something we'll never do

Listen to my words: I care for you
Look into my eyes and you'll see its true
I will fight by your side, I know you want to be free
Please , don't let depression take you away from me.

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I started it by drawing an outline
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Then I'm thingking of a face that can relate to Emptiness
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I think depress and sadness can relate to this
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Then I started doing and relating a poem to my drawing/sketchScreenshot_2017-11-12-21-45-44_1.jpg
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Then I drawn a evilness thing at the bac
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Then Finalizatiom
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Just remember: YOU SHOULD CONTROL your FEELING AND EMOTION , SO THAT IT WILL NOT LEAD TO DEPRESSION .AND DO NOT FORGET TO PRAY, 'CAUSE THIS WILL SAY IF YOUR GOING TO LIVE OR STAY

Categorypoetrycontest
LocationBaguio City, Philippines

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This is amazing! This is worth resteeming. I really love the poem you made and the art that goes with it.

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nice poem and nice art! This is amazing! Keep posting, can't wait for more! You have earned a follower :) Stay awesome!

Thank you brother 😁

Nice work ren.I love the message of the poem,so nice and artistic.Keep inspiring others.

Thank you @kimaben, yes I will 😀

Galing!!! You really love poetry right??hehehe

Hehe salamat @sharaine , yes writing poem and drawing is my stress reliever 😅😂

Your words and your drawing compliment each other beautifully. I loved seeing the process of how the drawing comes together. Great work. :-)

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