I beg to differ with you... I think this is an excellent piece of poetry especially for somebody who is not comfortable with the genre. This piece really resonates.
It is slow
Slow like the brown river
Rolling through many lands
Taking bare soil
Leaving hunger behind
I will see what I can do for this challenge! Thank you for tagging me.
You are welcome. Like I said - no pressure from me but your write such beautiful poetry!
And thank you so much for the compliment!! makes my brain twist in new direction. sometimes, it will, and sometimes, it won't lol
Sometimes poetry comes better to people who struggle with it in the beginning... It definitely is a great exercise for your mind. I think you're doing just fine.
thank you!! And stay warm. Crazy weather. More colder cold coming to all of you on the EAst. Crazy!!