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RE: A King By Birth - Poetry Bounty

in #poetrybounty5 years ago

Love this, Gaby! You've written a marvelous piece that feels as it should be married with the music. EPIC!

The soft guitar of the intro aligns with your sweet babe born to peace and harmony. The tempo increases and you show the princess, wild and strong, defiantly doing more for her people than simply choosing a suitor. Her running to explore the world and the storm crashing in to toss her about races our pulses as the song shifts to its metal middle. The pounding fear and the darkness to then her exhilaration of breathing, of surviving, has us cheering for her. Battered by the waves like the beating of the drums, she prevails.

The return to her war-torn wasteland of a home gives us another reason to adore her. Heartbroken at the loss, she does not flail and languish in sadness. This fair princess maiden takes up her steel to reclaim her home and return the peace to her people. With the power and determination she's shown, I've no doubt she'll succeed.

Though you've made me visualize so perfectly, I want to see a video of your poem to this music with the story!!!

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