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RE: Friday Poets's Exchange, Week 4, Contest and Community Building

in #poetry6 years ago

Beautiful Christian poetry. The voice speaks of the deviation of humanity, leaving the path of the Lord. I like that repetition in three:

How depraved, how depraved,
how depraved

We laughed and laughed and laughed.

I assume it reveals the three blows, the mockery of the evil one, the three Divine Persons, perhaps.
Good work, poet!

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Thank you so much @zeleiracordero. I love to use repetitions as an intensifier. 😊

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