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RE: Neptune claims my presence/Original poem – [100 Days poetry challenge (Day 41)]
Ooooh ... I perceive a lot of sensuality in this work. That fusion of sea and sand that transgresses the zones of time, reminds me that we are all that and more, when we give ourselves body and soul to another being. Good work with the words!
Yes, the sea once again claimed my presence