Love story - poetry(original) Poetry Dice Challenge #4, this weeks entry

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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It all started on a beautiful summer day
When she was out for a walk out
He had seen a boy he did not even know
That he will fall in love, starting the story.
He approached her, simply saying "good"
And since then the girl knew they would be together
That they will have a relationship, and maybe over the years
They will remember how they met, how they held their hands.
The boy asked him shy if he wanted to accompany him
On a quiet walk, he has something to talk to him about
And during the walk, the boy stopped instantly
He pulled the air in his chest with power, and said from a fire:
You liked me the first time I met you
I fell in love with you as soon as I saw you
And if you're not next to me, every day
Believe me frankly, I will slowly die.
Then the girl looked at him, between tears of happiness
He gripped him tightly, obviously dreaming of immortality
He kissed him with fire, the angel who imbratzisha him
And suddenly, then, they both felt love
And from that moment on, that story began
That brings happiness, but it brings the pain
It's so nice to have someone to love you
But it's ten times worse when you break up.
Like the whole world, over you is crashing. You seem to feel that neither the Lord speaks to you
You seem to see something, something is wrong
Like everyone, they all have something with you.

Their relationship was flowing, it can be said perfectly
They loved each other to know each other
They did not believe in gossip, they trusted each other
They had big dreams, many ideas on the sheet.
But as in any relationship, it must end
Like in any dream you need to wake up
The moment came when, their relationship
It was over, it had no future.
On a sunny day, when they strolled on the street
Both were silent, as if they were avoiding seeing
Then the girl stopped him, stopping at the beginning
And he told them about their relationship, it's about a past.
Then the boy suddenly began to cry
Because 1 year and a half, it did not run
It's been a long, beautiful relationship like theirs
A relationship that now has no future.
And the boy runs to the other side of the street
But he does not see a car, or does not want to see it
And then the car, in power strikes
The doctors resurrect him, but he eventually disappears.
Then the girl smashed, feeling guilty
Goes over a bridge, and drops into the water
And as he fell, he looked at the sky again
And he asks forgiveness, that he has killed his angel

Poetrydicechallenge # 4

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This is a great entry! :-) Thanks for playing!

Thank you.it is my pleaure To enter in this contest

What a sad ending. Very compelling poem. I loved reading and writing poems and have entered the same competition.

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