Poem / Mine
*Mine
Everything about you is so surreal
You're so damn perfect I just can't deal
Your silky, soft, supple lips
Your gorgious green eyes
Your amazing baring hips
Your sun-kissed thighs
Your smile is like a burst of radiation
You make me melt in temptation
The dimples in your cheeks when you speak
Send me flying to the highest peak
Your perky cute personality
That could bring me immortality
Streching my days far beyond my youth
You are the one truth
I only have you for a while longer
I'll make the best of the time
And when it's all said and done
I'll be greatful you were mine
By Ethan
Ah, young love.
this is great poem.
wow! so, romantic!!!
You are great poem writter
The goosebumps. The chills.
Good job and I like The pics
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STOPLove is the most creative force, and it's memory can be the most destructive...
Since you love poetry and literature, @xxsenpaixsamaxx, here is a poem of mine, about the loss of great love:
https://steemit.com/speakyourmind/@yahialababidi/for-anyone-who-has-ever-loved-and-lost-an-original-poem
I hope you do not experience the pains of separation...
I did a day after I wrote this poem and it sucked
Sorry to hear it ... Read my poem on heartbreak
I did, it was amazing I really enjoyed the images you used to describe the situations
Hey, thank you, very much - didn’t see your comments, there, so didn’t know.
Thank goodness we have poetry to express our joys and also our sorrows. Write on!
Thank mate :) I forgot to leave a comment but I did leave an up :)
Just saw that, Ethan, thank you :)
@xxsenpaixsamaxx I have a great poem ....u can check it out and post it over there ...I m a minnow so it's not gonna benefit me...maybe it benefits u...what say....expecting a reply man