Poem / For you
For you
There’s this girl,
She’s on a different world,
She’s like no other I’ve ever met,
She leaves me with no feelings of regret.
No matter how much time,
No matter how much money,
No matter if I’m broke,
Or if I’m no longer funny.
I just want to see you smile,
Even though between us there are a million miles,
An interesting thought crossed my mind,
I thought back on our time,
There’s a hole in my heart,
Ever since the start.
The hole will remain there,
Until one day I can properly care,
Provide you with the emotional stability,
That cannot be given by my current insecurities.
You are too perfect, too innocent,
Whereas I am quite the opposite.
I’ll perfect myself as best I can,
So that one day I can be the one to take your hand.
By Ethan
2018/01/21
Note: If there are any spelling errors or things you disagree with, I would appreciate it if you let me know :)
Wowww muy bonito poema,encantado con esas palabras, Saludos:)
nice poetry !
:) I can feel the sincerity in every words, she must really be important to you, so much that you'll do whatever it takes to be the person that you think she deserves. <3 But always remember that you may be not perfect but being who you really are is the best way to be one. Desuuu~ fightingggg! Good poem, Ethan. Loved it desu! ^^~
This one made me tear up.
Thank you Senpai
It's so sad but at the same time beautiful and brutally honest... love it <3
Wow, sad and relatable.....@xxsenpaixsamaxx i would appreciate it if you could check out my writings too, they are not as good as yours but still,
here's one https://steemit.com/poetry/@darkmayhem/void
Wow
nice job buddy think we've all been there at one point or another
love in the air love spread everywhere :). i like ur writing.
Haha. The beauty of love and the complexities that come with it.