Poem / Fill the Space
Fill the Space
The Earth is in a strange place
We are surrounded
By millions of miles of space
And yet we try to keep our personas shrouded
We only have the people next to us
We should share, laugh and trust
Try to open up to everyone
Unless it's that dude in the back alley from Hong Kong
We are social animals
Yet our inventions have separated,
The ability to speak face to face
We just end up creating more space...
There's a whole universe within
That we haven't explored
Get to know each other properly
And you'll never get bored
There are millions of miles of space
Fill it with the stars we see in every face
By Ethan
2017/06/24
Disclaimer: Hong Kong was used for rhyming purposes. Do not take offence if you come from there ;)
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awesome post (Y)
Thank you :D
a good poem and thank you for posting it
that eyed picture suddenly appeared on my desktop screen and scared the shit out of me, anyway nice poem @xxsenpaixsamaxx
XD thanks :D
My pleasure :D
I like your poem! You have the skills man! Following!
Thank you :)
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Indeed, we are mainly social animals that though we achieved a somehow evolution, we can not humanly link with each other.
Your poem is amazing, keep on going !!! (Y)
Thank You!!!
enjoyed this :). I can't tell if you meant that you rhymed Hong with Kong or that you rhymed Hong Kong with Everyone (everywong lol)
everyone
Gotcha, that's a toughie for sure, like orange
:D
Nice poem
I posted too pls look at it and upvote
Follow me at @pikachu01
I'll check it out :D
https://steemit.com/poetry/@pikachu01/a-salute-to-our-soldiers
Thankyou
You are indeed an old soul with great insight to what changes are occurring in this time. Ethan, just in the past few weeks, I've seen so much growth in you. You actually are becoming a freer spirit with deeper wisdom. Embrace this gradual opening of your inner self. I love the lighter expression in your poem. It was a brighter and hopeful step upward! Thank-you for your post.....Cabbagepatch
Thank you :D I was happy while writing today so I guess it just flowed in, I love the comments you leave, they leave me with a smile every time ☺
And you leave me with a sense of satisfaction and happiness with your real expressions of inner self. Realism is one of the characteristics lacking in people today. You really have a gift that should be nurtured and cherished. I believe you will reach a higher level!
Thank you! hope you have a good evening/day further :)
THANK YOU! I have nothing to add :). Just great!
Thank you :)