Before it ends (poem 3)
There is so much to say.
So many things, we most definitely can not forget.
Where do we start, before it ends again?
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There is so much to say.
So many things, we most definitely can not forget.
Where do we start, before it ends again?
<3
Peace & <3
What is there to say?
How many things exactly? Why are they unforgettable?
We can only try to describe the beauty of it all; the feelings
I believe that the possibilities are endless.
Nothing is unforgettable, it is more like they just are, and you can be aware of what is. It offers you a lot of peace.
Do you know that moment of real calmness and joy inside?
I'm just pushing you to write specifically... why is this the poem that only you could write? What pieces of yourself are lodged so deeply inside that they are inextricable?
If you are trying to share feelings, its best to share your specific ones.
Hey somethingsubtle,
It is the love and respect for all that is natural, for all beings.
We speak from the heart as we live and love.
These words are not mine, they are ours.
I like that you felt and saw the vagueness in this poem.
It is about feelings running through each other.
A feeling of apathy that sprung from the overwhelmed feelings and realization of life and death.
Poem 4, will be a more specific expression of feelings, just for you ;-)
Have a wonderful time brother.
beautfully picture
verygood
my dearfriend
@chitnaingoo thank you for your kind words.
I wish you a wonderful time
Nice picture :)
Thank you Karen :)
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