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We can only try to describe the beauty of it all; the feelings
I believe that the possibilities are endless.
Nothing is unforgettable, it is more like they just are, and you can be aware of what is. It offers you a lot of peace.
Do you know that moment of real calmness and joy inside?

I'm just pushing you to write specifically... why is this the poem that only you could write? What pieces of yourself are lodged so deeply inside that they are inextricable?

If you are trying to share feelings, its best to share your specific ones.

Hey somethingsubtle,

It is the love and respect for all that is natural, for all beings.
We speak from the heart as we live and love.
These words are not mine, they are ours.

I like that you felt and saw the vagueness in this poem.
It is about feelings running through each other.
A feeling of apathy that sprung from the overwhelmed feelings and realization of life and death.

Poem 4, will be a more specific expression of feelings, just for you ;-)

Have a wonderful time brother.

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