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RE: Storm-Battered, Similar Sands (An Original Poem)
You summed up possibly one of the worst mornings of my life, a friend went missing the night before, i got the news he passed away the next day on the train into work, your line "where perfect clarity blurs" summed up how i seemed to perceive the train. Everything became supernaturally vivid but at the same time out of focus, and yes at that point i was an island of misery and loss...
This is a poignant an beautiful piece, thanks for posting it.
Wow - thank you for sharing. I'm glad it could resonate.
it did and does.
I always really value your kind and insightful comments, i wrote this and would love it if you cast an eye over it, see what you think
https://steemit.com/poetry/@wisbeech/darkness-calls-a-poem-about-loss