Thoughts of a White Cloud
I’m aware and I relate.
I see your every deed – some helpful, some harmful,
I feel your every mood – some uplifting, some depressing,
I hear your every word – some uplifting, some damaging,
I feel your every actions – some constructive, some destructive,
I smell your sacrifices – some for good, some for evil.
Let us shun all negativity,
Let us patch all with light and love.
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A nice poem. I often look up at the clouds and try to imagine shapes and also wonder if they were soft cottony or silk pillows.
In your poem, I find references to people whose various moods, thoughts, and actions affect both themselves and others. The last couplet should be read by all. It is a good reminder to people to shun negativity and unite in the white light which is but a reflection of the glorious divine.
Please do join steem school poetry class. https://discord.gg/nHV5dvG
I don't do it much anymore, but as a kid I remember watching clouds for hours, literally day dreaming... I can trace back many of the things that I've achieved over the years back to those moments.
The great thing is that everyone's mood, actions and thoughts does affect others; it's probably the reason we haven't completely descended into bedlam... Good people still have a voice, although sadly it's getting weaker...
Thank you, on the last couplet.
On the steem school, I've already joined the discord... through @rosestar a few days back, however there is so much activity and channels, I'm completely overwhelmed. I'm still not clear on how it all works... Perhaps you could give me a hand in the discord...
Thanks for the lovely comment...
This is really poignant and so beautiful :)
I curate for @asapers and am going to submit your poem to go in our READ me ASAP newsletter :) Stay tuned...
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Thank-you! Thank-you!
You are so welcome! At asapers, we focus on unnoticed quality posts, and I think most of yours fits that bill.
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Congratulations!
Thank-you @lynncoyle1, I've commented in the Asapers post.
A short but straight-in poem! No wonder you it made it to the @asapers feature. Congratulations, @whitelite,
And, wait... Whitelight, white cloud! Does the poem follow from the name? lol.
Thank you for you comment @mirrors. Expect very little flowery speech from @whitelite. KISS principle applies, most times any way...
ROFL, Fear not I don't run around with a white sheet over my head, with little eyes cut out... in case that's where you're going with this... (and even if you're not - it was entertaining enough in my own head to give it a mention). @whitelite dwells where the white light is brightest and strongest... in Africa!
hup-hop!
As do i!
Oh wonderful...
Then you know my motivation :)
Glad you think so. Thanks
Congratulations!! On being selected by the Asapers! Good for you!! Keep up the wonderful writing 😊
Thank-you, I appreciate your wonderful support.