Three lines
1st has 5 syllables
2nd 7
3rd 5.
The challenge is to make them not just fit the sequence (like mine 😂) but to flow like a beautiful picture and an epiphany in one.
The structure adapted from Japanese traditional haiku are generally about nature, they run in three vertical lines. They contain an element of challenge or observation regarding topic referenced, like a juxtaposition or realisation. A mindful moment within nature perhaps. @brokemancode does this well. I on the other hand... 😆make it my own, narcissistic indulgence.😂
Three lines
1st has 5 syllables
2nd 7
3rd 5.
The challenge is to make them not just fit the sequence (like mine 😂) but to flow like a beautiful picture and an epiphany in one.
The structure adapted from Japanese traditional haiku are generally about nature, they run in three vertical lines. They contain an element of challenge or observation regarding topic referenced, like a juxtaposition or realisation. A mindful moment within nature perhaps.
@brokemancode does this well. I on the other hand... 😆make it my own, narcissistic indulgence.😂
Epiphany in one" is so zen
I think it is you 100% zen man.
You have found your poetic calling. 🙏
Water inferno.
Neurodegeneration.
Conscientiousness.
I dont get syllables either but I think that fits the 5 7 5 model, eh?
Omg, lol, you narcissistic haiku you :p
Yes, somewhat up my alley then, as ive studied taoism, buddhism, especially zen, and sit in nature for 11 years now, huhm.
I will look into this. I love Japanese art and how they flow with nature.