I enjoyed your poetry. It takes on an ethereal voice.
I particularly enjoyed..
Sometimes a soul needs saving,
A silver rip in a hard-life continuum.
I enjoyed your poetry. It takes on an ethereal voice.
I particularly enjoyed..
Sometimes a soul needs saving,
A silver rip in a hard-life continuum.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I did try to make the emotive words not too heavy or light. the character is kinda conflicted, hoping for a stroke of luck but not expecting it. Thanks for your comment.
I think you captured it just right.
I also loved that part. Beautiful!
Thanks @tripswithtam