Thank you for the feedback. I definitely wouldn't mind being a steemit emcee. I've been writing all my pearlescent poems in 16 bar verse structures, but not necessarily writing them with the intent to rap them, but I could easily change the syllabic layout to make it more rhythmic, but the most important factor is the beat that would fit the mood and theme of this one in particular. I'll definitely post more music soon. Just keeping my pen sharp and testing my creativity with a poem every so often. I really appreciate your thoughtfulness, suggestion and feedback.