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RE: ~Mother Sun~ AuThenTic HaiKu/|\Made With Love For EvErYOne/|\EnJoy Your DeLight
Nice poem @allgoodthings, I really like the last stanza. Overall a very appreciative work of art showing the beauty of what we easily take for granted when we disregard what everyday life has to offer us. There is much to admire and cherish in this life. Upvoted. By the way, you have a typo for Brightening.
Thank you @verbal-d . I reread this many times but the mind has a way of playing tricks sometimes, my First editing mistake, thank you for telling me I had something in my teeth ;)
You're very welcome anytime. It happens to the worst and best of us writers.
Ahh yes, we're all human to some degree
By the way, fun fact, it's said that if you took a picture of the sun everyday for a year, at the same angle in the same spot, it would create an infinity sign when linked together... that's where that stanza came from :) you could also do it by putting a crystal or something in your window and drawing dot where the sun reflects onto your ceiling everyday... I love fascinating things, bless!