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RE: Spiritvs Magvm et Sonvs Infinitas (The Spirit of the Mage, and the Sound of Infinity) [Original spoken word video]
Your delivery is sharp and smooth bro. Love the wordplay and the accentuation on specific phrases to emphasize context and rhythm. Keep up the unique and innovative creativity. The experimentation worked well in this piece and it deserves more upvotes! Glad I'm following you no doubt. We gotta keep our minds sharp, we may both have dark pasts in our own rights but humor and creative expression alleviate the pain for us to move forward indeed. Upvoted
Thank you very much for the detailed response, it means a lot to me to see exactly what it is that someone likes or wishes I did differently.
I've been telling my hiphop bredren that I am thinking of moving to spoken word over psychedelic instrumentals, after doing this one today I think I am going to do more. I have another piece I wrote earlier today that I will probably post tomorrow if I can find a good background track.
Thank you again for the comment. :)
You're most welcome thanks for sharing. Looking forward to the next piece, embody the lyrics :)