Thank you very much for the detailed response, it means a lot to me to see exactly what it is that someone likes or wishes I did differently.

I've been telling my hiphop bredren that I am thinking of moving to spoken word over psychedelic instrumentals, after doing this one today I think I am going to do more. I have another piece I wrote earlier today that I will probably post tomorrow if I can find a good background track.

Thank you again for the comment. :)