Pearlescent Poems #83: God's Cityzen Part 1 (Original Poem)

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This is God's world and I'm a citizen
I stand for truth but I sit in sin

My bible's a lot to read, I wonder when I'm finishing
But I know it's my soul I'm replenishing



It's not always a hit and win
But I can't get hooked gotta watch what I'm fishing in

It's not always hell I'm envisioning
But if I do it's a fiery imprisonment



I have a judgement, so what's my sentencing?


Is it worse than Mortal Kombat's finishings?
Thrown inside a volcanic fire kindling?


Knowing that it burns forever, never dwindling.
Can't plan escape or shake these chains hindering.



I cannot fathom or picture this, these images
I'll find a breakthrough point, lines of scrimmages


Cause when I think of these rhymes, mind's limitless
I'm apart of something bigger than me, God's appendages




Thank you for reading this post in its entirety, I hope you enjoyed it for what it's worth. Part 2 coming tomorrow



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Thank you for the update

Based from the title, I'm thinking that this one has such an amazing potential, brother. Moving on to part 2 to see how this unfolds. Great work on Part 1 though! Personally, I've finished the Bible once already. Truly a heavy task to accomplish.

Nice what a great accomplishment in my eyes, I have also finished the bible and have started over again, but I made this song before I had ever completed this mighty feat! I hope you enjoy this unorthodox beat, I'll be recording it very soon, hopefully within the next hour or so.

Nice! Count me in! I'm always excited for your work ever since I became a regular. Unorthodox beats are the best. I'm sure you'll do great with it, bro!

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