Pearlescent Poems # 60: Soulmates Part 2 - Tribute To My Wife (Original Poem)
Neglect it, disrespect it, abused like a bathroom stall
Reckless, careless with their actions, heart’s a trashed, rag doll
You’ll need more than only your shawls just to cover it all
Battered and bruised some choose over brew, to drink alcohol
Violence involved, vicious circle revolves you sprawled
An action that breaks love’s factions to fractions makes me appalled
Just know my love is not a secret, ‘cause it’s no cabal
A soulmate never can be bought like products in a mall
I value essence of your soul, not any wherewithal
I’m only gonna lift you up, I’m gonna air us all
Then I will land us in Miami, Paris, and Nepal
I’ll always be right by your side, ’til I can’t even crawl…
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thumbs up Great read and very well expressed! 100% Up Vote!
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Just give it a couple listens i kinda have an idea for it but not really. Ill brainstorm with you soon via steemit.chat
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Very nice poem my friend! Nice words and I like that you share this with who you love! It has been a pleasure to meet you and I hope to continue doing!
Cheers my friend!
Thank you very much my friend for your nice and caring words. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. I appreciate your comment and hope your week is good. Cheers
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Thank you for the update
This was such a heartfelt follow-up. Whenever I say that you've mastered poetry and prose, I mean every single word of it. I liked how you shut down the negative aspects of relationships in this part, vowing to never do such things. It definitely highlights all of the positive aspects that you've mentioned so far.
This is criminally undervalued, and I just know that Part 3 would more than make up for what this post could've made. My ears can't wait to take it all in. This is shaping up to be yet another masterpiece, brother!
Thank you again for another insightful and spot on comment bro. You definitely got the intentions for the first half of the verse and I always write from experience. It's truly terrible what people choose to do their "loved" ones, and this is a topic that needs to be reflected on because both actions and words can debilitate and damage deeply. I don't know why the payouts have been so low but onward I trek forward giving whatever gifts and gems I create knowing that the impact is priceless and will always be undervalued per say. :)
I keep refreshing on your page, eagerly anticipating Part 3 haha! With regard to payouts, I'm sure it's just bad timing. People who aren't able to listen/view your masterpieces are missing half of their lives, and they don't even realize it.
Thank you bro, I appreciate you checking back in! Part 3 is up so I'll be awaiting your feedback when you get a chance. And you're much too generous with your words and they are wonderful to read. People are also missing out on your wonderful novel, make sure to check steemit.chat please