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RE: Violent Love

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

I lived these lines <3

The best parts of this in my opinion were these two lines

and beg and plea for one last date
Well hold your breath and suffocate

And the whole last stanza <3

So grab your hammer
grab your knife
grab what weapons are in sight
Slit my throat and smash my skull
Make me wish i didn't fall
for you
my love
My baby doll
It's time to quit
we've lost it all.

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Thank you!!!! It means alot! <3 ((: I actually wrote the entire poem around that line "Hold your breath and suffocate".

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