Unintendedpoem: Ooh Smurfentaart

in #poetry3 years ago (edited)

That would translate
as smurf pie I guess.
It doesn't contain smurfs –
it's not even blue.
It's a pie crust spread
with apricot jam.
Whipped cream on top of that.
Grated white chocolate on top of that.
There's also a version
with cherry jam on the base
but that's a cheap copy.
Smurfentaart needs apricot.

by @TinyJazzyDahling

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As always. You're a pleasure to edit.

As always, a pleasure to be edited by you. In any genre. ;-)

Dit is een hele gave, ik weet nog wel een leuke mok waar deze op kan!

Hahaha you read my mind. Strak plan. ;-)

:D of een legging.

Hahaha, those last two verses really pack a punch. I think you had the right idea putting that on a t-shirt.

As you say, @damianjayclay digs out the beauty in the ordinary. Hmm, I should say that when I post mine...

Haha thank you, Chitty. hugs

Great poem .Your poem touch my heart and I love poem