The Death of Love - an original poem

in #poetry8 years ago

Pain, unlike anything ever felt
Laying shattered
Needing to pick up the pieces
None of that mattered

The pieces of the pieces broken
Needing you to mend me
What happened here?
Destroyed by issues we couldn't see

You never see it
Until its beyond repair
The death of love
The culprit, an affair

Its too late now
What's done is done
We can never get it back
Drowning the pain in bourbon


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Congrats! :-) Great Job! :-)

Thank you. I'm slowly getting the hang of this poetry thing.

The secret of poetry is it is defined by you. Surprise yourself, move your own heart, test your boundaries and you surely will start to touch other hearts.
Good job .. Keep it up.

Thank you! I think thats why I have enjoyed writing poetry, its still a new experience, but I'm having fun

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