Mmm now that's how its done!
"telling them a stake has been made,"
"An Angel has been Named."
Definitely my favorite lines, just how that whole stanza flowed felt right.
Mmm now that's how its done!
"telling them a stake has been made,"
"An Angel has been Named."
Definitely my favorite lines, just how that whole stanza flowed felt right.
It's weird, the stanzas I worry over the most, that feel the least flowing to me, are often the ones people like the most.
Perhaps because they're the core of the piece, so I feel the most self-conscious about them, and over how much meaning is imbued therein.
I'm glad you liked it!
Yes that's usually the way it goes. And then the poem you thought little of, people are loving, and vice versa. The Struggle!