A Dot That's Fading... (an original poem)

in #poetry7 years ago


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A Dot That's Fading...



Sometimes, I feel like crying
My then buried emotions came flying
Hitting me from different directions
Leaving me without any options

Feelings that are difficult to decipher
A strong heart that doesn't waver
Who would win this battle, I wonder
It's something that has gone on forever

What does my existence mean to you?
Do you only need me when you're feeling blue?
I hope not, because it would hurt a lot
Though I know from the start, I'm just a dot

A tiny dot that can be neglected
A dot whose feelings can be rejected
A minute entity in your enormous life
A dot who has been in serious strife

Sometimes I wonder, where did I get such power
The power to tolerate a humongous tower
The power to persevere in any weather
Hoping that someday, we'd be together

But, in all honesty, I'm afraid to say
This dot's power would run out someday
The tick tocking of the clock is slowly fading
Spirited away, there goes our happy ending.


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Full upvote for a splendid poem!

OMG! Thank you sir!! ^^

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Upvoted and re-steemed!

Maraming thank you! ^^

Your poem makes me think of one of my favorite movies:

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There is a feeling like no other, this feeling you describe. Maybe we can make it into a new word. ;-) Is there no happy ending when basic matter cannot be truly destroyed, only altered in composition?

OMG @robyneggs!!! I was actually thinking of Spirited Away when I made this poem.. haha... xD Thus I included the title in the last stanza... <3 <3 <3 Anyway, I'm trying to compose an entry for Poetrydice Christmas special!!! I miss joining your initiative... Hopefully, I could compose one today... <3

Oh please do! Dont forget the opening line: It's the most wonderful time of the year...! I totally caught on to your "Spirited Away" reference then, I knew it! :-) I get it. That movie helps explain the sort of feeling you get when you start to lose everything around you...

Thanks for the reminder... ^^
yeah~!!! It's really great that you can have the same interpretation that I was thinking of while creating this poem... <3
Will do my best to create a nice entry for Poetrydice soon... For now, Have to work.. hahah See you!

Really nice!

Thank you so much! ^^ I'm glad you like it... :)

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